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The Fire Red Woman... by ~lovedesquee:iconlovedesquee:



There once was a loving coulple man and wife. The Wife loved her husband dearly and her Husband her..but for some time now the Husband would go missing for days or weeks on end and suddely come home, but not as himslef.The poor wife frets over her dear Husbands odd behavior and goes to an old friend for advice.Her friend tells her husband is lying with another.The wife does not belive this and ignores her frien's warning.Soon after speaking wiht her, she later sees it her self her husband was changing...

So she decided to follow him one night when he goes out agian.The wife follows him through dark woods to find they come upon a near by lake.A woman with firey red hair comes forth from the other side of  the forest near her husband only cloaked in moonlight. All the other woman does is hold her arms out to embrace her lover.As the wife watched her husband with his new mistress she starts to cry and run from the scene.She then falls exaughsted by tears and despair when the sound of feet approching made her look up. A Fox sat there in front of her smileing at the wife. "Oh poor soul..." The Fox says"What troubles ye so??" the Wife explians her story and while she tells The Fox something inside her erupted! Anger and Wrath came upon the Wife."Oh human who has been tortured so..my friend you must rember. Hell hath no fury like that of a woman scorned..."The Fox held in her furry paws a sleek and deadly dagger.A wicked smile upon her face.The Wife took it smileing at the new frined she had gain. The Fox nodded and told her "Wait for your dear husband to come home.Once a sleep cut out his heart and put it in a pot of boilong water..once this is done you shall have your revenge". The Wife nodded and contuined home.
That night her Husband came home as The Fox perdicted. Just the same as the mindless man that he was after he met his mistress. This mad the anger in the wife boil more.She waited unitl he fell into a peacefull sleep. She watched over him,her husbands face in peacefull bliss.The dagger close to her back.She took the dagger to his heart and ripped it out.Her husband now dead and stuck in that forever slumber, laid there in the bed.The Wife quickly took the heart to the pot where the water was boiloing over. She threw the heart in and slammed the lid down. A wave of comfort came over her as she knew he would no longer love that fire red woman, but she also realized that he would never love her agian as well. With this heart reanching thought she cryed agian in sorrow and pain for what she had done to her husband.All that filtered her mind was  the fox's words and the fire beauty taking her one love. Still holding the dagger she looked at her self in it. The Wife's reflection stained in blood.She held the dagger between her breasts and thought of her dear husband. Not the one she had killed but the one she had fallen in love with, the one she had killed for. with those sweet thoughts she plunged the dagger in to her heart. After the wife killed herself over her own grief. The Fox came snatching the boiled heart and the heart of the wife. As she left the home she whispered to the dark night air " Hell hath no fury like that of a woman scorned.."

                                                                                       -The End-
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©2008 ~lovedesquee
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This is a fable i had to write for school this week....i didnt know how to write it very well so i hope its good for a grade please no stealign!! >< i do plan on making this for real!!!!!!! thank u and enjoying!!

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~blood-draik:iconblood-draik: Jan 19, 2008, 10:48:50 PM
I like it. It's a nice fable.

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~lovedesquee:iconlovedesquee: Jan 19, 2008, 11:45:48 PM Mood: Love
YEAH!!!!!! tank u!!

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Though i know i should be wary..
Still i vetnure someplace scary..
Ghostly hauntigns i turn lose:

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